This is a story line I have been working on for a while and I decided to do a quick summary of the main plot for this project. Basically it follows a ninja throughout his life and has hidden meanings within every image. I made it this way so the reader can interpret anything the way he/she intends to. Of course, there are many different meanings to it and I enjoy stories that have this option. The story is written in a poetic format and the complete story reads:
"As the world aged, the Infant layed still.
with his father in an unplayable depth...
... the Infant would have to pay against his will.
As the world aged, the Boy felt still.
filled with emotion...
... the Boy lacked a lot of skill.
As the world aged, the Boy was in need.
as a ninja, he had become a failure...
...so on his search for power, the Boy filled with Greed
The Boy's journey led him to a God's presence.
'All you want, for All you have.'
Though a Curse, the Boy wanted the Blessing.
As the World aged, the Man felt no pain.
The best ninja the world had to offer...
...but the Man felt no pain.
As the world aged, the Man had no heart.
Empty inside
He tore himself apart.
As the world aged, the Man played still.
The main message that the story tells, is how the ninja was cursed by his fathers actions and the depth he could not pay to (whoever the reader interprets) and results in him having no physical ability. As a ninja, this is a big deal due to the fact that physical talent is everything. this results in constant bullying, isolation and depression. "Filled with Emotion". But he has a big heart; the main character has the greatest heart in the world, but is the worst ninja in the world. He has an "inside", but does not have an "outside". this drives him mad, and insane, so he pursues the meaning of life and he becomes corrupt with greed and desire for power. this leads up to him striking a deal with a God Deity, "All you want for All you have." basically which means , he gives up his humanity, to become a weapon of society. From being a Useless person with Feelings, he is now a Monster with no Emotions. he has become a "Machine"immune to any emotion. of course, this drives him even more insane and leads up to his death. He ends the way he was born. "The Baby played still." "The Man played still." whether he takes his own life or was killed by someone, that is for the reader to decide. It's a shame I didn't finish it but i feel as if i explored almost all i intended to. 
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